cold,dread and darkness...
keep me away a distance...
do hoping to never see hope,
but it rhymes with death...
and you came to it too..
or do you see like I see...
Thus the water is too shallow to be blinded...
and sorrow felted like sorrow itself,
envy,greed and lust...
those are our triumph,...
merely you and I are the same...
or do you see like I see...
the world kill itself...
nor our killings...
their belongings are ours...
or most likely fear itself,
a shadow creeps into the darkness,
hoping to find light...
but a mere fool the shadow were,
in darkness,light absent...
the absence 0f hope in life,
in fact life struggle itself...
time runs, like lightning..
swiftly across the black sea...
or will it stop...and fall upon us...
us walking together,...
love, pure happiness,
or is it,nor is it...
each love gained,each love thrown...
or will you save it...
and thus a savior falls...
thus our strength...
solid as a concrete are...
or an abstract is...?
created by Mohammad Afiq bin Marzuki
Abstract Poem,Do you see what I see,2008
5 comments:
understand the poem....
afiq..can u help me..?
with what?
sometimes, wht u wrote here doesnt actually sounds like u
i guess wht i could say, u are actually more thn ordinary afiq i saw everyday. :)
: ) tthhxx
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